Aww... Thanks so much for the mention, JJ!
I am very glad to be one of your 'advisers'. LOL.
(I am still learning though until now)
I can't help but notice in your post that you have improved a lot!
Keep it up! I loved reading your amusing but very enticing, and enriching piece.
NOW, you are emerging as the authentic YOU--your secret sauce!
Your own style of penning is getting noticed, really. Soon, you won't realize it but you will have a notice in your 'story stats', "CHOSEN FOR FURTHER DISTRIBUTION".
Just mark my words, girl.
(If Medium will permit me, 50 claps are not enough for this) Take care.